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Tick Tock. Tick Tock. Tick Tock.

(e/c) eyes glanced up at the clock, eyelids fluttering and a yawn sounding from lightly glossed lips. A dainty hand with a few old scars across it reached up to brush a few strands of rebellious (h/c) hair.

You waited, your impatient nature getting the better of you, causing you to fidget in your seat and tap your pencil. 'Come on…' You think, watching the clock intently, another yawn escaping your lips before finally—

The bell rang for the end of lesson.

Chairs scraped against the floor as your peers lunged for the door, but their dreams of escape were cut short as your teacher called out and clapped her hands once or twice. "Students." She began in a clear tone before smiling sweetly at you all. "Have a Merry Christmas~!" She sang happily, shooing her class away with a small chuckle. A few students replied with a 'Happy New Year!' or a 'You too, Miss!'. You simply laughed and waved as you left the room last. You and your teacher never saw eye to eye, but that didn't mean you couldn't be civil to one another.

You filed into the queue of rushing students, eager to exit out of the school gates and into the freedom of the Christmas holidays. You were so excited for the day to come that you thought you could throw up the bad cafeteria food. But no more oily noodles and cold pizza. You were out of that hell hole and into the final event of the year.

"Took long enough…" You mumbled to yourself as you finally made it out of the pack and past the school's front gates. It was then, as you were taking your first step of freedom, that you placed your foot down on a slither of ice, of which you hadn't seen. Your body fell backwards before you stumbled to regain your balance, eventually coming back to your upright position.

Your attention was then drawn up to the heavens as they parted and down came the first sight of snow all year. The children nearby screamed with joy, older youth grinning at each other, some moaning that it hadn't come earlier.

You?

Why you just let out the loudest 'BOOYAH' you could, jumping into the air, unaware of the brilliant azure eyes that watched with interest.

"Wow…someone's enthusiastic~!" A smooth voice chuckled, going unnoticed by the people that walked beneath the branch of which stretched above the pavement, and none saw the boy crouched upon the branch, staff in hand. This included you.

For you did not believe in such a silly tale, as that of Jack Frost.
My first ROTG fanfiction!
I've been seeing a lot of Frost x Reader fanfictions, but it annoys me when people write them with the whole purpose of getting the Reader and Frost together, ALL TOO QUICKLY.
Thing called DEVELOPMENT.
So...hopefully I'll write up an interesting one~!

Chapter Two: [link]
Chapter Three: [link]
Chapter Four: [link]
Chapter Five: [link]
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TheKrystalCat Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOOO! Dang, is this continued!?
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Fanfictionfordayzz Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
ITS SOOOO GOOD SO FAAAARRRRR
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Edited Oct 26, 2014
Who me I believe. I believe like its nobody's business. 
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RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He's watching the reader😅😥😨😰😱
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Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I REALY DO BILEVE OK DONT JUDGE PLZ I love it KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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Eyeless-Jack101 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OH MA GAWD! I love it
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GlimmerRose Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Love it.
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Loved it ^_^
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like itHeart 
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KateSnow Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
This is fantastic.   I'm going to read the whole story.   
  excited I'm so excitedexcited 
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AH SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY! But thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
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Artemis-s-Bow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally agree!!! You won't believe how many times I thought the exactly what you said. Okay. I'm going read your whole story! FistPumpPlz 
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AHHHHH A NEW READER YAY
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Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Ok so how do I follow you YOUR FREAKING AWSOME
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ah thank you! You must be new uw u 

All you have to do, to receive notifications of any new submission from a user, is to watch them. When you go onto a user's account, there is a button to the left called 'Watch' next to 'Send a note'. 
Click on 'Watch' and then confirm it, and voila! 

Also, looking at your page, if you post your fanfictions in your journal, it's doubtful they'll be seen by anyone. 

Go to the top of your browser. There's a link called 'Submit'. Hover your mouse over it and then it will say, 'Submit Art'. Click on that and it will take you to the Submissions page. 

From there you can 'enter text into the submission pox, write a description of the fiction and title it. You can the tag it, so tat people searching for specific tags can see it. From there you can also put it into certain public folders where it can be classified. 

I suggest then submitting it to :iconreader-inserts: so people in the group or watching that group can also see your work~!


If you need any help with anything, let me know! uw u 
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:iconphantomotheoperaphan:
Lovely this is my second time reading it
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:iconxrhirhix:
xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you very much! Such nice much kind
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
It's a really good story
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divinearia33 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
u gonna continue?
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes! The next chapter's coming out within the next three days! 
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divinearia33 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good!
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starfire12601 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
The fact that they aren't falling in love too quickly most likely means that they aren't going to be too mushy-lovely dovey stuff like most jf x r I've read and trust me I've read A LOT. This just means I love your story so far
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thank god omigod i like this comment this is my life 
They are cute moments and will be more, but seeing as they've so far, only known eachother for a few days, I want to give it time! 
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starfire12601 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
I'm glad that you are
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SophiaTheRose Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student General Artist
BooYah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconjackfrostlover012398:
OMG! MICKEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ahaha-- -Someone's excited, ne? XD
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:iconjackfrostlover012398:
Yes, yes I am!
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
How did you get me so well
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I've been watching you....OHOHOHOHOHOHO~!
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MsLightningAlchemist Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Looking at the description before reading, I'm really intrigued to read. Thank goodness mine's a slow development ... kinda-ish ...

Now that I've read, I'm going to continue to read. So far, so interesting. Now, to finish writing my next chapter! ... Then more reading!
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ah---! Thank you very much for reading! I've read the first chapter of yours so far, and I quite like it! (I'll have to read some more when I get more free time!)
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Living-Voodoo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great story so far!
PFFFT PSSSH :iconyouknowwhatplz: The beginning is so me. 


Have you been stalking me?
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THANK YOU ADORABLE AND LOVELY READER
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yes. yes i have
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YouObvouslyLikeOreos Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good! You know, besides this one, I've never really read one of these where the reader actually doesn't believe in Jack at all... BUT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :D
I love this!!!!! :D
NO, THE EVIL LIFE MONSTERS ARE FORCING ME AWAY FROM MY COMPUTER!!!! NOOOOOOooooooo...!
RUNSIES
 I can't even touch this, so awesome!!! :D
Touch It
 In case you haven't noticed, I like things easily. :D
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

GFHITYOITFIOPUTORIUTOREYHTREUIOTERUTERIOUTRITHITEROEPODFKDFJGH

OMIGOD I LOVE YOU

YOU'RE SO NICE AND CUTE AND I DON'T DESERVE THIS LOVE OMIGOD YOU JUST UGH

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YouObvouslyLikeOreos Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!
YOU TOTALLY DESERVE IT!
la in love
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super-dash Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
to answer the question of the title....

I BELIEVE AS LONG AS JACK FROST LIVES .... but i would probly believe after that too :D
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Jack Frost is epic DON'T STOP BELIEVIN
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super-dash Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EXSAKTLY!
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Best song ever for Jack: Don't Stop Believing lol :)
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super-dash Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontrueplz::icontruestoryplz:
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol just imagine him randomly humming that for no reason
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super-dash Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lolz
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jordanb12 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Same here!! c:
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super-dash Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
C: i thing most people would agree :D
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AutobotJinx13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist
I Love This :)
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xxAlaskanChickxx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Artist
I cant see Jack Frost?????? :iconsobbingplz:
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Iceheart1997 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Thank you. I also believe that some of the fanfics were a bit fast paced.
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xRhiRhix Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's no problem! I was getting rather frustrated with them, and decided to see if I could do better~! ^^
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